Thursday, February 27, 2014

Upward Bound 2008: A Perfect Memory (Narrative Essay)

Upward Bound 2008: A Perfect Memory
Carleen Brandenburg (February 20, 2014)
                Throughout my high school years I went to a program called Upward Bound. Upward Bound is a program that is funded by TRiO, which is a series of federally funded programs that are designed for educational outreach. Upward Bound is meant for high school students who are either potential first-generation college students, meet low income guidelines, or even both. There’s a summer program which lasts for about six weeks, and then an academic year program where the Upward Bound students meet up once a month to have fun and learn about college at the same time. During the summer program, there’s a week long break where students can visit their family for the fourth of July. Some programs allow you to stay in a college dorm and others you commute to the college campus every day. The program I went to allowed students to stay in a college dorm. During the academic year portion of the program, they would hire tutors for anybody who needed help on school work (and was required for those getting any Cs or worse in school). The Upward Bound trip I went on during the summer of 2008 taught me important skills about making friends.
During late February my dad, sister, and I went to Luther College in Decorah, Iowa for Upward Bound Orientation. I felt nervous and shy at first, but after meeting Jazmyn, who was also starting Upward Bound this summer, it started to become more fun and interesting. At the Orientation I got to learn about what Upward Bound is, make new friends, and go on a campus tour. I also received a packet I had to fill out so they could set up the dorm rooms. Since I chose for them to pick out my roommate, I wouldn’t know until the very first day that Jazmyn would be my roommate. This made my summer a lot better having her as a roommate.
                June 15, 2008 was finally the day I would be moving into the dorms for my first summer of Upward Bound, which would last for six weeks. I was very nervous, yet excited to move into Olsen Dorms and for Upward Bound in general. I would be able to move into the dorms at 2 pm on that day. At 2 pm I arrived at the dorms with my father, mother, and my sister Helen. When I arrived at the dorm I had to fill out a form about any allergies and medication I was taking. Once I turned in the form, I went onto the second floor to sign-in and receive my key for my room. I also received another form I had to fill out which would explain the quality of the dorm and any needed repairs so they could fix anything. After receiving the key and the form, I unlocked my room and brought in my things so I could unpack. This was the moment I found out that my roommate was Jazmyn who I met at Orientation. This would cause me to be a lot more excited about Upward Bound.
                The next day would be my first day of classes for Upward Bound, and it ended up being very eventful. At around 9 AM, two staff members opened our door and woke me up with a good morning song. When I woke up I looked at my clock confused and then realized we were late for class. So I woke up Jazmyn and she also looked at her clock. In the end, both of us became panicked because we were late. The two staff members told us to get ready and then go to the library for tutoring. After we got ready, we grabbed a couple cereal bars and went to Preus Library. While we were walking, we got lost a few times which made the walk really confusing for Jazmyn and me. Because we were late, we were “campused”, which is basically being grounded. We had to check in at 9 pm and had a half hour to get ready for bed. At 9:30 pm, we had to be in our dorm room for the night.
                Every night before sleep, Jazmyn and I would hold a conversation. This would make me feel at peace (I eventually learned that she thought I was talking to myself). I would talk about anything and everything with her, which helped build our friendship. I don’t remember any of the conversations we shared at all, but I remember it being fun. For the first week we would sleep on the beds in our dorm room.
                After the first week, we decided that it would be fun to sleep by each other on the floor. It was a random decision, but it was probably one of our best decisions we made. We would do this every night for the rest of the summer. This resulted in better bonding and hearing the music we’d fall asleep to better. This made me feel happy and ended up being comfier than most people think.
                There was this week long break during Upward Bound for the 4th of July. That break was really boring, so when I arrived back on campus, I was really happy. I missed hanging out with Jazmyn. During our first week of being back on campus after the break we shared a class. The class we shared was called ‘UB Idol’. This class was taught by a staff member named Eli Pollock. In this class, we learned about proper singing techniques and had to split into groups of two to perform a duet at the end of the week. Jazmyn and I chose to sang “I’ll Cover You” from RENT. I thought this class was fun because I got to sing and learned how to sing better.
                A few weeks later, it was the last day of the 2008 summer for Upward Bound. It was a very sad day because that would mean I’d have to leave Jazmyn and go home. When Jazmyn was leaving for home, we gave each other a hug and traded stuffed animals, so we could remember each other. Jazmyn gave me her stuffed cat she got when she was young named Mr. Jolly. In return, I handed her my stuffed cat I made for my 11th birthday at Build-A-Bear Workshop. Even though we would see each other at weekend events during the academic year, it was still a sad day, since we bonded so much that summer.

                Upward Bound was still fun the following summers of my high school years, but this summer was the best because I got to become best friends with Jazmyn. Most importantly, the friendship we shared made this program fun and loveable in my view. The summer of 2008 ended up being one of my best summers ever and I’ll never forget all of the people that I’ve met, especially Jazmyn.

A Special Person In My Life: RaeLyn Rebekah Rose Walrod (Descriptive Essay)

A Special Person In My Life: RaeLyn Rebekah Rose Walrod
Carleen Brandenburg (February 6, 2014)
                A small and tiny infant can have an impact on a person’s life in ways they never thought possible. On May 15, 2012, my friend Jazmyn and her boyfriend Corey Walrod gave birth to a baby girl named RaeLyn Rebekah Rose Walrod at Mason City, IA. RaeLyn was a really tiny baby (weighing at only 5 lbs 5.2 oz), but she became so special to me because she’s a fighter, taught me important values, and has determination.
                RaeLyn is a fighter because when she was 23 hours, she had to be med-flighted to Iowa City for specialized care. While at the children’s hospital in Iowa City, RaeLyn was diagnosed with CHD (Congenital Heart Defect), a heart murmur, one functioning kidney, a defect in the liver, and Alagille Syndrome (is a genetic disorder, which affects the appearance of the person as well as major organs in the body). RaeLyn had to get a silo for her intestines (she ended up with a serious infection in the intestines), be put on breathing and feeding tubes twice, and overcome various tests and surgeries while at the hospital. When she was around four months old, she would finally be discharged from the hospital. However, RaeLyn will have to go through even more tests in surgeries in the future because of the various birth defects she has.
                While RaeLyn was at the hospital in Iowa City, she indirectly taught me various life values that are important. The life skills I gained were about being strong, keeping hope, and not taking my life for granted. I learned strength through being there for Jazmyn and Corey so they would cope better with everything that went on at the hospital no matter how much I wanted to breakdown and cry with them. I had to have hope that RaeLyn would be okay and nothing serious would happen while she was at the hospital. The most important value was not taking life for granted. I’m lucky that I’m healthy and that I don’t have all these defects. From now on, I look at life with a different (and more positive) perspective than what I had before RaeLyn was born.
                What I’m so thankful for is RaeLyn’s determination to leave the hospital. There were a few high risk surgeries RaeLyn had to go through. She would always make it through the surgeries no matter what, which always made me happy. Even when she was able to go home, RaeLyn was determined to learn everything that babies need to learn.
                Today, RaeLyn is about 17 pounds. She has mousy brown hair, with adorable brown eyes. She can do things other toddlers can do, even though she learned those things in a shorter amount of time. She’s still really tiny, as she can fit in the same size of clothes as a six month old baby. RaeLyn is super adorable and energetic. She makes all these cute faces at the telephone whenever I call.

                These are a few of the reasons why RaeLyn is one of the most special people in my life. I know that throughout RaeLyn’s life, there’ll be more reasons why she would be special in my life. I also know that RaeLyn will always be a fighter, teach me more life values, and be determined.

Advancements in Modern Technology: Positive or Negative? (Modern Advancements Essay)

Advancements in Modern Technology: Positive or Negative?
Carleen Brandenburg (January 30, 2014)
                Imagine the day where there weren’t computers, cars, phones, indoor plumbing, good medicine, or any other form of modern technology. Do you think you could survive during that time? I don’t think I could, so I believe technology has improved in a positive way. Modern advancements in the form of medicine, transportation, and social media has greatly improved the way we live our lives.
                Medicine has changed a lot over the years. Back in the 1800s, you had a really long wait just to see the doctor. The doctor would have to travel using a horse and buggy, so chances are, a minor thing would become serious. There was also a high risk of getting a disease because doctors wouldn’t have good hygiene when performing surgery, so the patient would risk infected wounds and the possibility of losing limbs. Today, we know so much about the importance of good hygiene, knowledge on various bacteria, how to keep germs from spreading. It also helps to have cars and ambulances, so we can get to the hospital faster and have less of a chance of something minor becoming something major. When I was in my senior year of high school, my friend Jazmyn had a baby named RaeLyn at Mason City, IA. When RaeLyn was 23 hours old, she had to be med-flighted from Mason City to Iowa City, because of various complications. It ended up being that RaeLyn would be in the hospital for her first few months of life, getting different treatments. If it wasn’t for good transportation, knowledge of diseases, and proper hygiene for surgery I’m pretty sure RaeLyn would have died.
                Another positive attribute to modern technology is the different forms of transportation. During the 1800s and first couple decades of the 1900s a person would have to either walk or travel by horse and buggy or train, which would make traveling longer than it would today with cars, planes, buses, etc.. Because of cars, we can get from one point to another point a lot faster. What would take a couple days in the 1800s, would only be a few hours now. It’s also good that we have various ways to travel because I can go see family in California, friends in Iowa, or even travel to different places in the world, if I have the money to do so.
                Social media is also a good aspect of today’s technology because I can keep in touch with my friends and family I don’t get to see at all. Because of Facebook, I met my cousin Naomi. Back in the 1800s I wouldn’t have been able to meet anybody new without seeing them unless I would have written a letter. Back in those days, the letter would be through the pony express which would take weeks to months to be able to hear from other people that live a far distance away from me.
                There are a lot more reasons on why I believe technology has improved the quality of our lives but for me, medicine, transportation, and social media are the most important few reasons on why today’s technology is an improvement.